Story starters are for the start of a story to try make the reader want to read more.
Boat : As I swim in the water I see a boat coming towards me I try to swim as fast as I can but I was to slow.
Toe : As I run through the bushes. I stub my toe and yell help my toe. Hoping someone heard me.
Cloak : While I’m doing my daily run I bump into somebody wearing a ninja cloak. I wonder what will happen.
Alone : I’m home alone with nothing to do then I hear gun shots in the distance I’m scared I lock myself in my room and hide. Did mum get shot is dad ok.
A nice first effort, Tahana, particularly the last one.